After having my profile workshopped, I feel I have a better understanding of what to do going forward. My first step will be to conduct and add in a second interview with someone who knows Gennaco. Hopefully, this interview will provide more perspective and help flesh out my piece. I will also need to either break up some of the quotes or simply remove parts of the quotes. This will reduce some of the wordiness of my piece and make it easier for my readers to understand. I also received some critiques about my grammar, lede, and repetition. I really enjoyed receiving these critiques, as they have all made my profile that much better. I think with these few touch-ups I’ll have written something worth reading.